At one point in "A Game of Chess" she writes "WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL." Is that what you recall?
>>> David Boyd <[log in to unmask]
> 08/15/15 4:28 AM >>>
Yes, I dimly recall the one time I did some facilitated delving into the facsimile edition being a bit surprised that Viv actually in an annotation praised Eliot's way of putting it - and sure that comment actually related to the Game of Chess part, which, given the content, made it all the more intriguing that the subject of it all had liked it so much: might well be reasonable from this to infer that, at least when feeling rational, Viv herself had a balanced and objective insight into their current marital situation.
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> On 15 Aug 2015, at 04:08, Nancy Gish <[log in to unmask]
> Why assume without a source or evidence that it is a personal dig? Would she have added the note to Tom about accepting or not if it were? Why could it not be simply another Kellond line he had omitted or a common phrase that fit much better than the one he used, which it did?
> Clearly the images are based on them (it is clear on the Facsimile pages--as in Pound's "too photog" comment), but nothing in any of Viv's editing comments suggests she was using the text to dig at him or that he was not respecting her notes.
> If she did want to snipe, it would hardly be in a league with the image of her as hysteric. They were pretty mutually damaging.
> >>> Carrol Cox <[log in to unmask]
> 08/14/15 7:50 PM >>>
> They = Tom & Viv. I am interested in what sparked Viv's line about children. My original query got no response so I came at it a different way.