A condition that sparked some of the genius of the poem. Now that's an insight, Peter. Thanks, CR On Saturday, August 15, 2015, P <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > I for one haven't lost sight of the major theme of sterility in the poem > and the emanations from the unconscious that resonate so strongly, eg. > "bats with baby faces". To see it so concretely in a very down to earth > conversation just strengthens it all the more. Eliot was deeply disturbed > at the time ("I can connect nothing with nothing"). That condition no doubt > sparked some of the genius of the poem. The children line speaks to the > condition of the whole society whatever the class. Eliot may not have > experienced it as a dig, but Viv's personality tempts one to think so. > Still, surely, how could he not have looked at the matter personally? > On 15 Aug 2015 11:43 am, Ken Armstrong <[log in to unmask] > <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml',[log in to unmask]);>> wrote: > > > > On 8/15/2015 10:57 AM, Chanan Mittal wrot > > Nor can one ignore its resonances vis-a-vis Eliot's own married life > > One doesn't have to ignore them not to be distracted by them. > > > Eliot must have been painfully alive to its implications for him. > > > Maybe,maybe probably even, but what's the point? It's the implications > for us the readers that matter, isn't it? Putting so much effort into > making one-to-one equations of what's in the poem with what was in Eliot's > life seems a way to avoid meeting the poem on its own ground, or worse, > denying that there is a ground on which to meet the poem. If biographical > speculation is our ultiimate interest, then ok, speculate away, but let's > not confuse it with honoring or appreciating the poem's action. > > Ken A > > > On Saturday, August 15, 2015, Nancy Gish < > <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml',[log in to unmask]);>[log in to unmask] > <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml',[log in to unmask]);>> wrote: > > Of course not--it was not at all covert. Nor was he at all unaware that > his images of Viv were extremely negative. Pound, at least, said it was > "too photog." What has that to do with her reasons for editing a line, > making it more effective, and explicitly leaving it up to Tom to use or > not? > > The issue here is about the text and whether it has any evidence to > suggest what Eliot thought or felt about what she edited, and it doesn't. > If there is any in letters, I have not seen it but would be interested. > N > >>> Chanan Mittal 08/15/15 12:59 PM >>> > Eliot could not have been unaware of the line's suggestion vis-a-vis his > own marriage. > > CR > > On Saturday, August 15, 2015, Nancy Gish <[log in to unmask] > <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml',[log in to unmask]);>> wrote: > > Eliot also clearly respected her intellect and skills at this point. > > Re: "protocol"--just read the text of the Facsimile. And biography, > especially the new one by Crawford. There is no reason at all other than > wild speculation to think that at this time he "winced." > > >