Tom, if the body is seen as an impediment to salvation, its destruction is a good thing, right? This attitude exists within Christianity - from Aquinas maybe. But it also is inherent in the Hindu ascetism that also figures in The Waste Land. Drown it, burn it, starve and parch it, but get rid of the body and its needs. Diana

From:  Tom Gray <[log in to unmask]>
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Subject:  Re: Fearing death by water
Date:  Thu, 9 Aug 2007 09:05:09 -0700
Considering the death of Phlebas and a a possible
redemptive quality.

The poem describes him as:
Forgot the cry of gulls, and the deep seas swell
And the profit and loss.
                           A current under sea
Picked his bones in whispers. As he rose and fell
He passed the stages of his age and youth
Entering the whirlpool.

I don't see any redemption here. Far from redemption I
see oblivion. Far from finding redemption for his past
life, his past life has come to nothing.

In answer to the general question about the
relationship of this image of Phlebas to a general use
of water as an image, this image is very specific.
Death by water is a life in which every thing is lost
and nothing is gained. It is somthing to be greatly

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Gunnar, Tom and Rick: Doesn't the discussion below
indicate that the Eliot's use of "water" as a symbol
in TWL is so equivocal that it cannot be connected to
any consistent signified? This would not be a flaw in
Finnegans Wake or Gertrude Stein's Tender Buttons
(water is water is water) or any text that takes
semantic shifts as a subject, but in a poem that is
otherwise symbolic it seems a misstep. Diana


From:  Gunnar Jauch <[log in to unmask]>
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Subject:  Re: Fearing death by water
Date:  Wed, 8 Aug 2007 20:26:28 +0200
Am 08.08.2007 um 17:40 schrieb Rickard A. Parker:

>I wrote to Diana (in part and on Fri, 3 Aug 2007):
>>Somewhere in this long thread I believe you asked
>>something like "Why fear death by water?"
>Tom Gray quoted this in a reply and added (on Fri, 3
Aug 2007):
>>Doesn't Eliot provide and answer to that question?
>>"Consider Phlebas, who was once handsome and tall as
>I'm reading your reply as Eliot setting up the
comparison "Phlebas
>died and you will too."  While certainly true, I
don't see that as a
>reason to fear death.  Diana and CR were discussing
the redemptive
>quality of Phlebas' drowning.  I'm not going to go
that far myself
>but it doesn't appear to be a death to be feared.
Nor did the
>drowning of the fishermen in the draft of the poem.
Nor the
>to The Tempest scattered within the poem (Those are
potatoes that
>eyes.)  Other Eliot poems that have death by water
also don't seem
>me to be fearful of a death by water.
>     Rick Parker


did you consider the last line of Prufrock:

"Till human voices wake us, and we drown."

They seem to imply redemption by  seaweed wreathed
sea-girls as well  as fear.



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