CR, even that would have humanized my cerebral narrator as he/she was before I installed a few human emotions! Diana

He could -- instead, or as well -- wipe his hand across his mouth

and laugh, and have the advantage, after all !

Diana Manister <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
Dear CR: I thought I should temper my misanthropic outlook by making my narrator a bit sentimental about his lost loves! The poem was a bit hard-bitten without that. Cheers, Diana

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