am 8.1.2003 22:46 Uhr schrieb Sara Trevisan unter [log in to unmask]:
It rises through the rocks, just noticed by a cloud.
it thunders, echoes loud
within deaf mental locks,
"with deaf'ning mental locks".
Nice try for an Italian, dear Sara.
For meter's sake, the Swiss suggest for the third line:
B.t.w.: I'm not too sure about a cloud's capacity to notice anything.