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Re: Peake's poem am 8.1.2003 22:46 Uhr schrieb Sara Trevisan unter [log in to unmask]:

It rises through the rocks,
it thunders, echoes loud
within deaf mental locks,
       just noticed by a cloud.

Nice try for an Italian, dear Sara.

For meter's sake, the Swiss suggest for the third line:

"with deaf'ning mental locks".

B.t.w.: I'm not  too sure about  a cloud's capacity to notice anything.