am 8.1.2003 22:46 Uhr schrieb Sara Trevisan unter [log in to unmask]: It rises through the rocks, it thunders, echoes loud within deaf mental locks, just noticed by a cloud. Nice try for an Italian, dear Sara. For meter's sake, the Swiss suggest for the third line: "with deaf'ning mental locks". B.t.w.: I'm not too sure about a cloud's capacity to notice anything.