TSE July 2016
Re: OT - Yves Bonnefoy - The New Yorker
Carrol Cox <[log in to unmask]>
T. S. Eliot Discussion forum.
Sat, 16 Jul 2016 10:25:06 -0500
I haven't been following this thread so I don't know who or what you are translating, _but_ the following cadence --
Then, towards evening,
-- leaps out. Perhaps the pause at the comma underlines the weight of "towards." Anyhow, I like it.
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