Conceivably, London is the narrator. I don't see a standard singler voice
There is an interpenetration and metamorphosis of voives.
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> "A whole" and "a unity" may not be the same. "A Drunk Man Looks at the
> Thistle," for example, seems to be framed by a "whole" of inclusiveness,
> not a unifying by exclusion. I never feel a final sense about what
> Eliot's "whole" is, but it does involve exclusions in a way MacDiarmid's
> equally vast and brilliant poem does not. I do not think there is ever
> a valid claim that "poetry must. . . " because one can always find poems
> that don't . . ., whatever it is. But in the case of TWL Pound at least
> thought it was a single text from beginning to end. Eliot seemed unsure
> both when he suggested including "Gerontion" and dropping "Death by
> Water," and much later when he called it just "rhythmical grumbling."
> There is, for example, a single narrator of "Drunk Man" who can pretty
> much be identified with MacDiarmid. It is problematic that TWL has any
> single voice. I am not sure Diana's view of it as monologic is right
> even though I once argued the same thing. I feel sometimes that Eliot
> really can't control the voices of his characters like the women in the
> pub or Marie or whoever asks about "the third who walks always beside
> >>> Ken Armstrong <[log in to unmask]> 08/02/07 11:27 AM >>>
> At 12:23 AM 8/2/2007, Richard Seddon wrote:
> >To me both Pound and Eliot seemed to be working to some sense of the
> >fitting together.
> Excellent point. Whether you call it a whole or a unity, if it is one
> poem, however well executed, it is a unity. Interesting, too, that while
> Pound and Eliot viewed the poem as a whole, they might not each have
> it as the other did. Seems probable that they didn't.
> Ken A
> >They seemed to think that there was some whole into which
> >a variety of very fine poetry did not fit. Examples are "Gerotion" and
> >ship board scene. Other poetry was added, after Pounds condensation,
> >Eliot seemed to feel fit in with and enhanced the rest.
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