Viv's sensibility seems to have been uniquely her own,
if the film Tom and Viv is any indication.
Her contribution to the manipulation of the poem could well be much larger
just he scratches on the ms.
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From: "Rickard A Parker" <[log in to unmask]>
> And wouldn't you think that if the line was bad enough for Vivien to
> catch that Pound would have been correcting it too?