Dear Greg,
    I seem to following in your feet. I didn't mean to ignore your
post--I didn't see it until I'd sent mine off. Thanks for pointing out
the problem with transmission of the accents. Here's my attempt to keep
the marks in line:

    ~ / ~ / ~ / ~ /
    The intolerable shirt of flame [GJ]
    ~ ~ / ~ ~ / ~ /
    The intolerable shirt of flame [MSK]

It is an interesting verse.

Marcia